We are learning how to use dialogue in our writing. Our teacher asked us to make these 2 people have a conversation with each other. This is what my conversation was.
WOW Rosie! I really like how you have structured you characters dialogue, you have expressed how they experience problems with selling certain stock. I love that you have used different and unique names to show that the characters are foreign. Keep up the good work!
WOW Rosie!
ReplyDeleteI really like how you have structured you characters dialogue, you have expressed how they experience problems with selling certain stock.
I love that you have used different and unique names to show that the characters are foreign.
Keep up the good work!
Nice work. I like the names, but I think that Kuala Lumpur is the name of a city somewhere in Asia.
ReplyDeleteChris,
ReplyDeleteYes, Kuala Lumpur is the name of a city somewhere in Asia, that is why I chose it.
Rosemary
Wesley Intermediate