This is my poem I wrote called swimming, I called it swimming because to me all of these things relate to swimming. I like this poem because it really defines my dreamy personality. I often feel like I am in another world.
When I glide through the water
I feel like Neptune's daughter
When I ride a wave all the way to the shore
I feel like I’ve been let through a door
When I read a book, reality has gone
I am taken to such places as the amazon
It is nice when I find another place in my mind
Sometimes I feel like I am deaf and blind
When I sail over the waves
I can only see sand, sun and caves
I like the feeling of isolation
Away from everyone in creation
Hi Rosie, I like the poem. It looks slightly unfinished though. Well done on the poem again.
ReplyDeleteHi Rosie,I really like this poem in a way it relates to me as well,but I think you could of done a little bit more though but again its a cool poem.
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